Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding.
Introduction:
Topic sentence:Exploration can creat conflict and misunderstanding.
Thesis statement:Explrations can creat conflict and misunderstanding just like they have different style to live,they have different languages,they also don't know each well.
Rising Action
Topic sentence: Explrations can creat conflict and misunderstanding when they have different style to live.
Concluding sentence:explration can creat conflict and misunderstanding.
Climax
Topic sentence: Explrations can creat conflict and misunderstanding when they have different languages.
Concluding sentence:explration can did a huge job.
Falling Action
Topic sentence: Explration can creat conflict and misunderstanding because they don't know each well.
Concluding sentence:explration can creat conflict adn misunderstanding.
Resolution
topic sentence:exploration can creat conflict and misunderstanding.
concluding sentence:exploration can creat conflict and misunderstanding.
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5/10 You need to spend more time on your plan. Be creative! Make it interesting to read.
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Thank you Ms Chan,I will try my best in next days...
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